Seeing a fanfic that has potential from reading the premise.
It also has great grammar and spelling.
The characters are all in character!
It’s a completed story!!
ALTHOUGH I HAVE A SERIOUS BONE TO PICK
KILI SHOWED UP LIKE FIVE TIMES
AND FILI WAS AGAIN RELEGATED TO THE GROUP SHOT ONLY
AND I REALISE YOU WANNA MARKET YOUR HOT DWARF BUT THE SAME FATE AWAITS THEM BOTH AND YOU ARE SIDELINING
THE HEIR TO THE THRONE
whY DO YOU KEEP DOING THIS WB